Get help before sending your SCREENPLAY off to industry professionals in Santa Barbara, California For Sale

My script analysis looks at each scene to find what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved.
For the last few years I've been writing, rewriting, and analyzing screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers. I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays to date and have sold five. Plus, I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: In one analysis the writer won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. Another analysis helped the writer acquired one million dollars in funding toward making their film. I also helped a comedy writer whose films have grossed 100s of millions of dollars with his hard-boiled thriller.
I charge $250.00 for a script analysis. I take PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis. I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to effectively rewrite your screenplay.
Dan